Thursday, October 10, 2013

Blogtober #8 - Dance

{This is a short story written from the prompt, Dance. This story is 1,083 words long. I appreciate comments on it!}


                Cheers, laughter, and excited speech filled the air as the caravan of men on horseback made their way down the road. The villages celebrated just as loudly as the men made their way through. The entire kingdom was rejoicing; the news was spreading like lightning. The men, bone weary from battle, made their way home.     The war was over, the peace treaty was signed. They were at peace. “Can you believe it, General Hood? Two years of fighting, and we’re now on our way home for good.” one of the men asked gleefully after dismounting as they took a rest from traveling.

                “Just as much as the last eighty times you asked me.” He chuckled. The man laughed and walked off to join some other men. General Wyatt Hood leaned against a tree and looked down the path they still had to travel. He would be home by nightfall. He couldn’t wait to see his mother and father again, and his daughter, Lanora, was sure to have grown three feet since he last saw her two years ago. Two years ago he had gone off to battle. She had only been three. In just three days she would be turning five. How much had she changed since he saw her last? How long were her golden locks now? Had her face become freckled from playing in the sun? Did she look even more like him than before? Or had she grown to look like her mother, Eleanor?

He turned his gaze down. Young Eleanor wouldn’t be waiting for Wyatt when he arrived home. She had been eighteen when they married, twenty one when he had gone off to war. He had been twenty-nine when they had wed, thirty-two when he had gone off to battle. He still carried the letter his mother had written him exactly nine months ago, telling him Eleanor had run off with the blacksmith’s apprentice, leaving Lanora behind for him to take care of. Maybe it had been unfair for him to marry her when he was eleven years her senior. Eleanor was the beauty of the town, and it made sense that her father would want her to marry into a strong family, which the Hood family was. But that hadn’t been what Eleanor wanted, and now she had what she wanted. And Wyatt was about to receive what he wanted; to be home with his daughter.

“On your horses, men! I want to be home by sundown!”
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It was dusk when the men entered the town. The whole town was waiting for them, and in front of the crowd was Wyatt Hood’s family. As the crowd cheered and enveloped the soldiers, Wyatt swung off his horse and embraced his mother, greeted his father, and then bent down to one knee. Hiding behind her Grandfather’s legs was a little girl with blond curls. Wyatt smiled. “Hello Lanora, do you remember me?”

The little girl stayed silent for a moment, before slowly nodding.

“You are my daddy.”

He smiled and nodded.  “Yes I am.”

Lanora stepped out from behind her grandfather and approached Wyatt. She had the same blonde curls as her father, his dimpled cheeks, and his bright blue eyes. Thank goodness she had her mother’se nose. As she stood in front of her father, she meekly asked “Can I give you a hug, daddy?”

Wyatt grinned and nodded. He embraced his daughter for the first time in two years. His mother was crying with joy, and his father stood by looking proud of his only child. Wyatt lifted his daughter up and turned to face his troops. “Men, at ease, tonight you stay in my town!”
Everyone cheered.
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It was going on midnight and most of the town’s people were still awake, celebrating with the troops who were staying over for the night. They were all in the square, the local band playing, the young girls dancing, the young boys watching from afar, too embarrassed to ask a girl to dance, but obviously wanting to. Lanora had gone home earlier with her grandparents; Wyatt had decided to stay with his troops. He sat on a bench, beer in hand as he watched the revelry before him. Many couples were leaving, and the dance floor was clearing, although many single men and women were still enjoying the festivities. Wyatt looked around. Why wouldn’t they dance together? To his knowledge no new laws had been passed to outlaw dancing between singles. Something had to be done.

“Whitlock! Yoder! Grab a girl and get dancing!”

The two men snapped to attention at the sound of their commanding officers voice. Wyatt laughed and stood in order to join his men in finding a partner to dance with. Many eyes followed their movement as they searched the crowd. Whitlock and Yoder were quick to find a dance partner, Wyatt not so much. The girls seemed to shy away from him as if he was a forbidden object. Maybe he was, after what happened with Eleanor. He was sure it hadn’t happened quietly.  Out of all the ladies in the crowd, only one didn’t seem nervous when he approached her, in fact she smiled at him as she stood in greeting.

Wyatt bowed. “General Wyatt Hood.” He introduced himself. The young lady curtsied and returned the introduction.

“Anna Margaret Coomes. Pleased to make your acquaintance, General Hood.”

Wyatt held out a hand and gestured to where the couples were gathering for dancing. “Would you give me the great honor of a dance, Miss. Coomes?”

Her smiled widened as she took his hand. “It is I who would be honored to dance with you, General Hood.”
Wyatt gracefully led her to the dance floor and with ease they joined in on the dance. By the end of the night, Wyatt had danced five dances with young Anna Margaret. He escorted her home, and then made his way to his own house, to his own bed. As Wyatt walked down the road, he reflected over how different life was now. He still wore the ring on his finger, although he wouldn’t consider himself a married man anymore. He had a young daughter to raise with no mother, and he was sure his father would have him take his place as leader of the town now that he was home for good.  But Wyatt didn’t find the tasks daunting, in fact, he found himself looking forward to this grand adventure he was about to go on.

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